Rhyming/Flow
I THought This Was A Little Weak In Some PLaces, But Then KIlla IN OThers. YOu COuld Have Added More MUlti's In - WHich Would've Helped The Flow. Your RHyming Was Good, You Used Accenting There Too! .... 7/10

Vocab/Wordplay
THought It Lacked This A Bit, You Consistantly Used Abbreviated Woreds ie..Ne, + , U...6/10

Concept/Topic
Concept Was Killa, And You Stuck To It Throught The Verse! Don't See Many People Doing That BUt You Had It Nailed! 8/10

Overall
Nice Piece, As I said Could Have Use More Multi's n' Better Vocab...But Nevertheless It Was Good....7/10