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Old 07-19-03, 02:06 PM   #17
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Da Curse Killed It. And His Verse Wasn't Too Great
blacksash your lines were strectched and that makes
a verse look extrememly gay. you had punchlines that
didn't even make sense or matter...robbing your
grandmothers purse? wtf is that....it's gay...so elevate
and you'll get better. nice opener curse, you used
a nice display of multi usage. so yeah


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