Ill Mental Has No Showed
Saturday Is Too Late, If It
Was Today It Would Have
Been Good...


fgee

i liked your verse a lot, it had everything
that was expected..nice vocab a strong
flow and nice story...your stretched out
bars are really annoying to read. that would
be a major improvement on your part if you
could shorten them up a little bit...nice job

phrantik

i'm left speechless, that was excellent...taking
writing and doing that with it, as to exploring
the different meanings of writing you possess
and describing them in such a beautiful manner
excellent job...

phrantik won. this worked out that he was
put in the tourney because ill mental didn't
show...excellent job to the both of you...

V. Phrantik.

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