really nice, definately enjoyed it a lot....

"my boy and my girl before me losin their souls and goin cold steel~
the rain drops catch on their eyes now they resemblin tears~
holdin this piece i consider expiring too but i'm rememberin fear~
nigga i throw you a phony pound baby i kiss your luscious lips with hesitation~
i take a look at your swollen stomach apologize then taste my last respiration~"

that was probably my favorite lines....u got that feeling across so clear it was almost scary, lol....i've had a similiar thing happen to me before to...and at first u think u have to pick between the two, then u think both should go....difficult situation....i wish you luck...
LP