Yo this was Nice man...It had a nice concept too it....U stayed on topic...the content of this was also nice....

And now i realize, my skins a barrier ..and beneath are lies..
im ready for hell, only to find, this hell flashes in my mind..
^^^Favorite Line...Really liked that ish

i hope too read more from u.......i give this a 9/10
If it was longer I would nominate it into R-B LEegend
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