word bash, nice reply

Tone. this was very nice. i felt it all
the way through...your flow is always
very strong and you used some
nice word usage that made this piece
all the better.


My lungs burst and rip, inside i cant help but to give in..
Chokin at the bottom since no one taught me how to swim..
im out of it .. every second ticks, and soon my faith bleeds
i watch my friends and family reach out, to suffercate me

^ that's dope as fuck ^

espescially that last line....damn..

are you going to enter the topical league?
you could do well ....great job...pz

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