Rhyming/Flow
Non-Existant I'm Sorry To say! You Need Help In Rhyming - Contact Me,Bash Or Sand (Thats The Three catz That Come Into My head At The Min, Theres About 50 Others Too). Learn About MUltis Too, Intersyllable Rhyming! 1/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Same As Above (Non-Existant)..Seek Help From A Dictionary Or A Rhyming Dictionary! You had An Attempt At Wordplay Which Was Good - u wanna drive away Alicia
but u dont got the keys - Imprve On That! 2/10

Concept/Topic
Not Too Sure, Lost me In A Few Places. Pick A Topic That relates To You And You'll Find It Alot Easier To Stay On Course! .... 2/10

Overall
Read The Above Concentrate On The Following: 1.Rhyming/Flow - (Add Multis etc..)
2.Expand Your Vocab - It Seems restricted.
3.Keep On The Topic! ...... 2/10

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