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Old 07-20-03, 04:46 PM   #7
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bones crushed beneath the wreckage, passengers neglected
Most of them id never met and yet i felt strangely connected.

Nice .. ^

Worded dope, i liked this .. it had some cool imagaries ..
i felt like i was there .. good job sweety .. multi's were
pretty nice, vocab good .. and you stayed on the topic
well, what else can i say .. you wrote a iLL open mic bro ..

Good Job ..
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