This was fuckin ill. Yeah it was short, but to me it felt like maybe it was supposed o be short, cuz maybe if it was longer then it couldve messed up the piece.It had a good flow, nice structure, didn't have crazy vocabulary that wouldv'e fucked up my whole mind. It was a good drop. Lookin to see more from you
My lungs burst and rip, inside i cant help but to give in..
Chokin at the bottom since no one taught me how to swim..
im out of it .. every second ticks, and soon my faith bleeds
i watch my friends and family reach out, to suffercate me
So slowly, i fade away to the dark as i close my eyes..
i got what i wanted, cause you never fully live, until you die..
peep my piece If I ruled The World
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67169