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Aite... let me break this down:

R-Dot-Capone
First time was a fluke. We both know i'm better than u Curse/
U couldn't win this shit if Sureal came back in & edited ur verse/
^Niceee line bout sureal... but rhymin' is weak.

Battlin' R-Dot? Ur just askin' 2 die/
I'm lyrically known 2 bring the *pain* like window delivery guys/ (window pane)
^Heh, the window pane made ma laugh... but first line was short.

Pull Jay-Z out ur avi & tell him give u a verse 2 send in/
The *outcome of this shit* will still be black & white like i *shitted a penguin*/
^The Jay-Z verse just stumbled on itself... the penguin line was crazzzzzy

Better come with all types of black magic & heavy artillery/
Because like fetuses in the 7th month u can't get rid me/
^Similie was killer... but rhyme was weak again.

Get it right, ur record is nothin' but hype/
Dawg ur punches hit as hard as faggots in pillow fights/
^Sick ass punchhh, i was like "oooooo"... but first line is short again.

The way i flip when i'm spittin' razors is rippin' u cuz/
This battle? No split in decision ur on a crash collision like Left-Eye's Expedition was/
^Weak rhyme... decent punch.

Flowin' against me is suicidal. When i battle u smile dude/
R-Dot's ur idol. Ur arthritic flow makes it easy 2 snatch back my title/
^Filler

Remember the name. RB legend. I'm the sickest that spits/
I could make condoms out of my skin and u still couldn't fuck with the kid/
^2nd best line... behind the sureal line.

DaCurse...
When u see DaCurse comin bitch u betta think fast…cuz I’ll do like your name say
And Cap-One in your ass…. Didn’t learn the first time so I’ll continue to blast, I got plenty of ammo for this lyrical fag
^The play on his name was mad funny, but talkin' bout guns n shit is played.

Got shook the first time like he was havin a seizure… given eternal headaches to this fool cuz man I spit fevers…don’t doubt the skillz make these hataz believers…. U couldn’t end my life if you sent da grim reaper
^Decent punches, structure is whack.

Def kids take cover when they hear my clip-toss, I’ll be known for servin Capone wit his fourth and fifth-loss, my fault… but I feel like u use shit for lip-gloss, got your tongue on his balls then he fucks your ass raw
^Who is the guy in "his balls"? First line tite... second line filler.

When I battle its like pms, I know I’m crampin you style
Treat your face like toilet bowls and take a shit on dat smile
Beatin me likes long division so this might take a while
This time I’ll leave yo ass speechless like the cat in 8 mile
^These punches were sick, except the last line... the long division i was like "oooooo".

Vote=DaCurse... this was a close battle, but DaCurse edged it just barely.