That was raw as hell (er, no pun??) nfamous. Yes still in a fairly cryptic way. I can see that's most definetly your prefered style of writing.


Anyway, you really came out with a whole barrage of emotions. Pain and anguish fluctuating(sp) from softer to more harder times. Enabling the situation to be seen more vivid by the reader.

A kind of venting piece. Getting it onto paper as you said. So no criticism from me.

Oh, but may i just say. You controlled your raw emotions quite well in this piece. You showed desperate 'chaos' in quite a well executed way. Especially the ending.

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