ok this is wat i thought

Bribeone1:I thought your verse was ok, it had its vocab and it was well written and decent structure, yours didnt catch my attention as much, i mean it caught my attention but not as much, with that said that brings me to sureals piece

Sureal:I thought your piece was excellent, definately a perfect piece if not then very close to it, the vocab was great, u kept the audience in suspense and it was a miracular piece, it definately caught my attention

so, with all that said

Vote=Sureal