I felt you started off well. Using a certain amount of simplicity, you explored the 'subject' well.

But then, the last stanza was just off. I felt you should've explained the situatin further before she hung herself. Gone more in depth, instead of suddenly going to it.

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By the way:

If you want more replies, you should reply to others. North Wales? Heh. Some great views though. You speak Welsh?