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Old 07-22-03, 01:51 PM   #3
varentao
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Originally posted by Na71v3 13oi
a yo where u go? i'm from 503 too


At least comment on the piece. Instead of just asking a question.


Onto the piece.

Gritty and real. The imagery and meaning was strong, and i most definetly dig wha it is being said.

It had an 'on the edge' like style which was executed quite well.

Felt the ending could've been done better, but the meaning was there.

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