*sings* Girl you're my angel...your my darling angel....wait wait..ill stop...
hmmm...very nice and simplistic piece that actually came straight from the heart...
The love connection that u prolly both have is magnetic that it directly attracts ur inner emotions to his uncredible feelings.
The terms u used mostly were enough to express the deep meaning that you want your special someone to understand. props for that.
When i read this...i remember the first ever poem i wrote when i was 9...its kinda funny...ill try to find it and post it on here so u can see...hehe
well i liked it...and good luck with you and brian..
Drop some on Rhetorical Insights.. you got potential and besides...it doesnt hurt to try...thanks!