hmmm...interesting but the fact that there aint too much in it made the whole piece sort of hanging on a thread. Its like lacking something that i mostly look for in writing but for some reason i cant tell you what it is because i know u have it inside and u just gotta familiarize with it and use it.

This is not bad at all. The simplicity made this piece understandable. keep it up!

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