WOW...the whole concept made me think.

"This Is The Result Of Wearing
Your Heart On Your Sleeve From
Gazing At The Image Thats The
Feeling From Me Each Step Closer
Is Another Step Away "

^^im really feeling this line so much because i actually felt this at some point in my life. The truth behind these words reflected on my whole self and thought upon something that i learnd from the past.

"With A Wack Verse You Dont
Have Rhymes When They're
Just Words Thats Word Forget You..."

^^something between those lines lies an unextractable sense of involvment with my writing. thats awesome.

You put and contructed ur words at some level that you actually trying to make a point.

Its nice to read tho. nice job

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