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Old 07-22-03, 05:17 PM   #8
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SyniKiLL-

-decent intro... kinda soft though but good flow.
-second bar was okay... but again kinda soft.
-middle of verse had great flow and i could read it well
-some of your lines are short... but they flow well
-good closer

Manik P-

-the fact that you cry about your opponents verse makes you look bad.
-you are feeding off his verse... and you didnt flip it well at all
-good flow... but lacking punches and wordplay
-your ending was not very good either... you lacked punches in this vers.

^^^ i dont really think SyniKill's verse was pre-written...

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