http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67489

^^^ please vote above for me voting here...

d-krew_reppin-

-your rhyme scheme needs work... you need to rhyme your lines better!
-your intro was weak... you need to punch him to open it up!

itz da dolla krew shorten it to "da D", how can u rap? u still learnin da abc's//

^^^ best line

-your last bar (closer) was not good either! need to punch harder

~JacK ThA RippA~

-good rhyme scheme... a little better then d-krew
-better wordplay then d-krew
-better personal disses and harder punches.
-decent closer... better then d-krew

VOTE: Jack