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Old 07-22-03, 09:58 PM   #13
peyo
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Ima break it down cause I'm bored so don't think I'll do this again.



Young's gonna be 'shut down' cus he 'got no business' openin his trap//
fall back, you couldn’t 'eat MC's' if you snacked on 'BIG-Macs'//
^^^^^Pretty Good

Young just tryin to be big but him & his verse certainly soft and played kid//
go 'battle a whoopie cushion' cause you seriously 'on some fake shit'//
^^^^Wasn't feelin this one that much
stop sprayin shit, or I’ll cut ya tongue from out ya mouth//
sign in your real name and watch me 'bust this fraud' on 'all accounts'//
^^^Ill

It's like Bruce's opium addiction, I don't think 'High Lee' of this pussy & I see all//
Young take over RB? 'get a grip' like gravitational pulls during a free fall//
^^^^Ill

Illuminate-my-presence..fumigate-this-pest..deliver the k.o. wit a flick-a-wrist..etch ya name on my hit-list//
Lacin’-Dis Bitch-wit-spits. I can’t resist..its like five-on-one, cause you be facin’ my fist//
^^Good

Good Verse overall, would of been better with some multis


Like ~a-returning-affection~, my rymes got a ~certain-complexion~//
~100-percent-garaunteed~ to give ~an-emcee-erection~//
^^^Sounds homo but I get what ya mean so ill


Got ~dis-"kat"~ gettin ~hard-for-my-rymes~//
Not ~for-money~ but u know ~im-certain-ta-be-droppin-dimes~//
^^^Ill nice how you inked with wordplay
Da ~young-p-virus~ crashin ya computer, leavin ya ~rap-career-lost~//
But still u ~copy-and-personalize~ my moves like i wuz ~hot-sauce~//
^^^Ill

Now it's like u ~at-a-hospital~, cuz my verse ~jumpstart-ya-heart~//
And ~until-now~ u didnt know ~"white"-flow~ wuz a form of ~"art"~//
^^Good flow but I don't get it

So I ~quickly-dismantle~ any herb callin himself an ~em-cee~//
Pretend im ~"THE-DOC"~, lyrically ~take-out-ya-heart~ and leave ya feelin ~"emp-tee"~//
^^Ill

Ill verse but you need multis too


Overall Good Battle but Young P came hard

Vote Young P