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Old 07-22-03, 11:11 PM   #27
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Originally posted by peyo
Ima break it down cause I'm bored so don't think I'll do this again.



Young's gonna be 'shut down' cus he 'got no business' openin his trap//
fall back, you couldn’t 'eat MC's' if you snacked on 'BIG-Macs'//
^^^^^Pretty Good

Young just tryin to be big but him & his verse certainly soft and played kid//
go 'battle a whoopie cushion' cause you seriously 'on some fake shit'//
^^^^Wasn't feelin this one that much
stop sprayin shit, or I’ll cut ya tongue from out ya mouth//
sign in your real name and watch me 'bust this fraud' on 'all accounts'//
^^^Ill

It's like Bruce's opium addiction, I don't think 'High Lee' of this pussy & I see all//
Young take over RB? 'get a grip' like gravitational pulls during a free fall//
^^^^Ill

Illuminate-my-presence..fumigate-this-pest..deliver the k.o. wit a flick-a-wrist..etch ya name on my hit-list//
Lacin’-Dis Bitch-wit-spits. I can’t resist..its like five-on-one, cause you be facin’ my fist//
^^Good

Good Verse overall, would of been better with some multis


Like ~a-returning-affection~, my rymes got a ~certain-complexion~//
~100-percent-garaunteed~ to give ~an-emcee-erection~//
^^^Sounds homo but I get what ya mean so ill


Got ~dis-"kat"~ gettin ~hard-for-my-rymes~//
Not ~for-money~ but u know ~im-certain-ta-be-droppin-dimes~//
^^^Ill nice how you inked with wordplay
Da ~young-p-virus~ crashin ya computer, leavin ya ~rap-career-lost~//
But still u ~copy-and-personalize~ my moves like i wuz ~hot-sauce~//
^^^Ill

Now it's like u ~at-a-hospital~, cuz my verse ~jumpstart-ya-heart~//
And ~until-now~ u didnt know ~"white"-flow~ wuz a form of ~"art"~//
^^Good flow but I don't get it

So I ~quickly-dismantle~ any herb callin himself an ~em-cee~//
Pretend im ~"THE-DOC"~, lyrically ~take-out-ya-heart~ and leave ya feelin ~"emp-tee"~//
^^Ill

Ill verse but you need multis too


Overall Good Battle but Young P came hard

Vote Young P


damn motherfucker took the words out of my mouth