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Originally posted by peyo
Ima break it down cause I'm bored so don't think I'll do this again.
Young's gonna be 'shut down' cus he 'got no business' openin his trap//
fall back, you couldn’t 'eat MC's' if you snacked on 'BIG-Macs'//
^^^^^Pretty Good
Young just tryin to be big but him & his verse certainly soft and played kid//
go 'battle a whoopie cushion' cause you seriously 'on some fake shit'//
^^^^Wasn't feelin this one that much
stop sprayin shit, or I’ll cut ya tongue from out ya mouth//
sign in your real name and watch me 'bust this fraud' on 'all accounts'//
^^^Ill
It's like Bruce's opium addiction, I don't think 'High Lee' of this pussy & I see all//
Young take over RB? 'get a grip' like gravitational pulls during a free fall//
^^^^Ill
Illuminate-my-presence..fumigate-this-pest..deliver the k.o. wit a flick-a-wrist..etch ya name on my hit-list//
Lacin’-Dis Bitch-wit-spits. I can’t resist..its like five-on-one, cause you be facin’ my fist//
^^Good
Good Verse overall, would of been better with some multis
Like ~a-returning-affection~, my rymes got a ~certain-complexion~//
~100-percent-garaunteed~ to give ~an-emcee-erection~//
^^^Sounds homo but I get what ya mean so ill
Got ~dis-"kat"~ gettin ~hard-for-my-rymes~//
Not ~for-money~ but u know ~im-certain-ta-be-droppin-dimes~//
^^^Ill nice how you inked with wordplay
Da ~young-p-virus~ crashin ya computer, leavin ya ~rap-career-lost~//
But still u ~copy-and-personalize~ my moves like i wuz ~hot-sauce~//
^^^Ill
Now it's like u ~at-a-hospital~, cuz my verse ~jumpstart-ya-heart~//
And ~until-now~ u didnt know ~"white"-flow~ wuz a form of ~"art"~//
^^Good flow but I don't get it
So I ~quickly-dismantle~ any herb callin himself an ~em-cee~//
Pretend im ~"THE-DOC"~, lyrically ~take-out-ya-heart~ and leave ya feelin ~"emp-tee"~//
^^Ill
Ill verse but you need multis too
Overall Good Battle but Young P came hard
Vote Young P
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