your flow wasn't too bad, but it was still
elementary, the content here was good
i felt it, umm 'merk' is a terrible word that
shit pisses me off, but whatever. you closed
it nicely and badly at the same time, i mean
hold shit down...it sounds like some kid off
the block with a wicked jumpshot slangin'
crackrock type shit and that's not my steez
at all, but yeah...work on rhyme scheme
shorten your bars a bit, you have potential
i can see it. elevate. pz

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