Rhyming/Flow
Was Average, You Need To Add MUlti's To Smooth It Out And Take It From o.k - Tight! It Was A Little Choppy In Some PLaces. 5/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You Have Good Vocab, BUt Try To Use It MOre Than ONce In A Line, You KNow?
"time to withdraw and rethink our whole perception/
for unnecessary deaths caused from a misdirection/ - THat Is A Good Bar There, Using Complex Vocab More Than Once In A Line!
You Had Some Wordplay Too: "we puttin up walls hussein can only put up a fence" - THis Was Pretty Weak, But It's A Start! ..7/10

Concept/Topic
This Topic Is PLayed Out! I Used It Once Ages Ago, Now That The War Is "over", Catz ARn't Really INterested In It! PIck Something That Specificly Relates To You! .. 5/10

Overall
Could Have Been Better, Will Be Better When You Elevate! You Had Mad Potential, Can't Wait To See You IN A few Months Time! Up Your Vocab, Worpdlay, FLow (multis) n' Pick a realating TOpic! .... 6/10

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