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Old 07-23-03, 09:37 AM   #5
RythmicTendicies
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Rhyming/Flow
WEak, Needs Alot of Improvment mos def. Go To The Tutorials Section And Look Up Flow n' Structure! Learn About Multi's n' INterline Rhyming! ... 2/10

Vocab/Wordplay
^REad Above^, Go To Tutorials! Almost Non-existant Here Dawg! ... 1/10

Concept/Topic
Couldn't See Any, Part From Some Hints Of Gangsta wannabe! Stop Ridin The Admins n' MOds Dicks! ..0/10

Overall
Lost Of Elevation Needed!
-Flow
-Rhyming Abilities
-Up Your Vocab
-Learn About Wordplay
-Pick a DEcent Topic
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Word!
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