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Old 07-23-03, 11:44 AM   #5
bouncedoggydog
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Nice job, I was drawn in from the start and did not lift my eye's unit the end.

This is somewhere in the universe left alone in fear that the disease of ignorance that it carries will be spread to any who try to interact regardless of their intentions


^^I enjoyed this part, ignorance is a really scary issue, and you do a good job of pointing that out to your audience.

Overall, I enjoyed your entry,

My only critic would be that you could have been a bit more inventive or creative with the ending, but that is just my opinion. Great work, peace out and much respect....
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