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Old 07-23-03, 12:44 PM   #36
Violent~Wordz
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Ok..Its LIke This Honestly My Vote = Feeble Minded..Yo..

Mr.Mayhem..You started Off Ok.But..You Started To Fall Off...Right After This Line..

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Mr.May's Line

You can't get close 2 me you comin short like a group of midgets,


^^After That...Ur Verse..Felt Off..Flow Chopped..Structure Of Verse Wasnt To Good Either....But Ya Know...
Feeble..Wasnt Ya Best..Verse..But...I Think ou Stil Pulled It Out..You Had.>Better Harder Punches...Also..Bettah Flow..Because Of The Multies..YoU had...But You Also Felt Off Towards The End..Of Ya Verse...But Neways...Ya Know...Good Battle By Both...


~UnO~