lol was funny n fun, but baisc na mean, BUT dont panic, contstruction was iight u just gotta elivate alot in vocab n muiltis n meta n all, BUT that comes natureally, what ya gotta do is accept advise (n u askin for it) so looks like ya can n change slowely,,, dont be thinkin ma shit is dope n thats it cuzzz ma shit, any1s shit is always can be improved,,,, respect playa