Heres An Link..Go Vote And Poll On It..::
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66984
Vote - Brooklyn - Clearly Got This...Better Flow..Punches Etc....Overall Better Verse...Flori...Very Very Stretch Lines Yo...Try Shorting..The Filler...And Just Go At-Em...You Did Have An Nice Verse Though..-Peace...
Hit That Link Up..And Drop Honest Votes...The Both Of Yall...