lol...this was a pretty good/funny piece. the chorus was the shit..

Blunt you lacked a little bit on the vocab but you still shined on this.

I got that, get popped for your 5 cent pop can
you got an empty 40 bottle I want that, it's a quarter return

^your best line in this..

Word-i thought that you stole this show.. your verse was the most comical and had the best flow overall..

brain damage thought disturbance-
fake my death to collect and instead added a debt on health insurance-\
FUCK!

^^lol...lifes a bitch.


Master- it seemed to me that you drifted off the topic and that took away from the overall quality. but, your vocab and flow was the best here..

So push me…Then watch me…Leave a fuckin mess
Take the blades from your shoulders
Then carve a crucifx in your fuckin chest

^^your best moment


overall i think that your 3 styles went well together and this was a quality piece...

7.5/10

now hit my first topical up yall

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67605