Yeah, i like what you're trying to do here.

It's written well, though i feel needs to be read over and done over at least 5 times. It has things missing here and there. Seems not quite 'there' yet. But a solid basis. Oh wait, you said itt wasn't complete yet. So it's all good.

Oh, and i dunno what kind of debate thing or whatever this is. But i'd say you subtely move onto exploring another side. Then another. Three should do it.

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