The way you rounded it off (last line) was kind of crap. No, it was crap. Though i dug what you were trying to say with it.


but the overall piece was very good. No wait, everything before that last line was very good. If not better than very good.

It could be that cos i felt it real deep, and it spoke a lot home truths on the subject. A whole lot.

Either way, i personally liked it a lot.

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