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Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
nice shit from Gangsta...u had some tight ass rhymes homie....and Hypnotic....work on rhyming more...and u'll have this shit down pat too aight....anyway...
Best Line from Hypnotic:
nice shit here....Lauren Hill line was nice...lol....
Best Line from Gangsta One:
ur opener and closer was weak...but ur body of ur verse was pretty ill...nice punches all over...tight lines...and u rhymes mad ass shit...
Overall: i think Gangsta One took this....nothing hard on Hypnotic...just work on a lil' more complexity with ur verses...u nah mean homie....keep the shit up u two...
BREAKDOWN
Multis - Gangsta One
Vocab - Gangsta One
Metas - Gangsta One
WordPlay - Gangsta One
Flow - Hypnotic (Gangsta ur barz are too strung out)
RhymeScheme - Gangsta One
Creativity - Gangsta One
Complexity - Gangsta One
Violence - Gangsta One
Vote - Gangsta One
peace
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