Rhyming/Flow
Was O.k For The first Few LIOnes, Then Really Fell Off, To The pOint Where Hardly Anything Rhymes. Try To Keep All Your Bars The Same, It Flows Bettter - Learn About mUlti's Too And Proper Structure. I POsted A Tutorial On Structure IN The Tutorial Forum...2/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Was O.k For MOst Of It, LIke Everyone You had Good n' Bad Lines, BUt Keep At IT...4/10

Concept/Topic
I Didn't See How The Title Related To The Song, But Try To Keep On The Topic And Don't Fall Off....1/10

Overall
3/10 - Raed Above And Elevate, Don't Think I'm Trying To be A Hater, I'm Only Trying To Help You Elevate - You'll See That It All Works Out It The End.

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