There Isn't Much To Break Down With This...

Some problems:
1.It's Short
2.POsted In caps
3.Not Much Rhymed Really
4.No Flow!

Some Up's:
1.You Had One Good bar:
LOSE THE HEART OF THE GAME COS YOU DONT SAY WHAT U SEE/
THE ONLY SHOOTIN YOU SAW HAPPENED ON THE T.V/
2.You Have Some Potential!

Keep Elevatin!