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Old 07-24-03, 10:58 AM   #11
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'To Her, I’m Non-Existent, To me She’s Distant, I’m Persistent ....... I’m Scared, To Approach, She Has My Eyes Notoriously Visually Impaired...'

Feelin' that shit dude... I can relate to what your goin' through in a way (you read my last post... you know...)

Decent wordplay... not your best... but decent... Good concept... Good wordplay... flows nice.... my favorite line is...

'My Durable Bones Are Aching, More Emotionally Insecure Hearts Your Breaking...
In My Boots I’m Shaking, I’m Awaiting For You TO Announce Your Current Forsaken...
So I Can Make My Anticipated Move, Then Your Heart n’ Tender Bones I’ll Readily Sooth...'

Keep bringin' that ill s$$t..
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