i wasnt grafix, it was my first rap online, i just wanted to see what everyone thought about it, and for them to tell me the bad points, so i can work on it! i will hit you up later, im getting my bitch to help me on it, she's very good! if i need help afterwards i will contact ya, Thank you for everyones opinion, and for their advice, it will help me to elevate! Cheers again