Rhyming/Flow
Was Good, The Flow Was Dope In Some PLaces, And You Experimented With Interbar RHyming...6/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Could Have Been A But Better, Try To Expand Your Vocab, And Experiment With Wordplay Too...Average ... 4/10

Concept/Topic
You Had A Deep Feelin' Here, You had A Deep Concept. But I Found That It Was Blacked Out By The Gangsta IMage, You KNow. As You Elevate You'll Find That Gangsta IMage Isn't The way Too Go! Keep Up The Deep,Emotional Topics..7/10

Overall
Was PLagued With Some Bad Flow n' Lack of Vocab, 6/10 Could Have Been Much Better..BUt You'll Get There!

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