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Old 07-24-03, 06:35 PM   #9
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This Was An Okay Read But Rather Simple..
Some More Wordplay May Have Made
It More Interesting Or Stand Out From
The Millions Of Other Writes Like This.

You Might Agree Or Disagre But You
Could Have Made This A Lot Better
If You Let The Descriptive Part Of You
Coincide With Your Lyrics..It Didnt Show
Up Here But It Wasnt Bad

Peace
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