*Very nice, great peice*

You realy did a hell of a job on this, complex, yet not a rough read. That is something not easily done, complexity usally leads to a harsh read, but your drop was melodic. Your intellect is on display, and it just jumps out at the reader. Impresive.....

Nice associaton of the planet with deity, that ideology is classic.

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