hmmm, the multis were there i noticed a couple of nice punches/ images, but can you actually relate you what you're writing? i mean this topic is played, played, played to death and the hook was basic as fuck. i cant understand why you put another member of your "net crew" as writing that or why you put the name of a beat at the top of a text piece. if its a track its a track, then make it an audio.

and oh putting B.R.E. presents in the title of every text piece you drop, it looks dumb. and try some originality with the subject matter instead of trying to be an internet gangsta.