yo this is against the rules,

both verses were kind of weak, no hate to yall this is constructive criticism...

both of yall should use multiz and werdplay in your verse to make your punches hit harder....and yo add more punches, but i gotta admit you guys both have a nice flow, mos def kept a nice flow thru out the whole verse, one werd of advice tho, NEVER EVER EVER use 3 lines rhyming, you have to keep it even otherwise it totally fucks up the rhythm of your verse, i noticed yall did that a few times, and none of this, ima grab a baseball bat and crack u.....not saying u said that but that kinda shit in battles is wack as fuck.....try and use personal disses, about their name, where they come from, how many battles they've won/lost.....

yall need to work on your werdplay MAJORLY, i didnt see werdplay from any of you, and i didnt see multiz, or cold disses.....try to elevate in those areas, if you need help hit me up on pm....

peace nice battle,

sorry i aint got 100 posts....peace bro'z

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