Rhyming/Flow
Off The Chain! This Shit Was Blazin. Both Of Your 2nd Verse's However, Were Superior To Your First!
"And pain's been recycled, I'm like a 13 disciple...
Spitin' scripture out of a holly book, it's like sin is my rival..." - LOved That Bar Ruth!

Chyna, Didn't Understand The Way Structured Your 2nd verse but It Was Hott. Flowed Smooth All The Way Through! You Had The Sorta Poetry Styke To It... Damn...9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Really Shone Through. It Resembled The Emotion Involved in This piece! Mad Wordplay On Both Parts...8/10

Concept/Topic
Never Once Walked Away From The Topic, You Thought Throughly About Each Bar Cos It Was Bangin'! People At First Glance Might See This As Another Love Song, But If Your REALLY Read It Then You'll Find That It's Original - You Made It Your Own...9/10

Overall
Fuckin Straight A Piece! As I said In The Last Thread - Not Many Songs LIke This Goin' About Anymore! Great Read, Only Downfall - The Hook. Sounded A Bit Too MUch Murder INc'y, But as Your Said - 2 mins Before Posting It So We Can Excuse You...9/10

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