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Old 07-25-03, 07:16 AM   #3
RythmicTendicies
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Wow - That Was Small!

Rhyming/Flow
Was Straight Dopeness.. You Made Mad Use Of Interline Rhyming, MUlti's. IT Flowed Right Of My Tounge..Damn...8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Every Line Had Killa Description, Killa Vocab. You EXpressed Your feelin's In Ever Bar: "Increase Of The Numbers Involved,While Viewers Watch Entised
The Anger Inside,Hidden For Years,Exploding Now On The Mic"
- Word, Tight...8/10

Concept/Topic
Never Fell Of Once. Original Topic. LOved The Way You Ended It. It Was LIke The Rest Of The Song Built Up To That Climax, Ready To Erupt: "Lava Like Termoil Lurks In Egos Colliding On Course,When Erupting" - Building It up (nIce Wordplay There)..Then Just Exploded At the End:
" Lay On The Ground Defeated,My Destiny,Paid In Full
57 dead,another 40 injured,at the hands of the Raging Bull"
! ..9/10

Overall
Was Dope as Fuck! Only Downside, Could've Made The Text A Bit Bigger..lol..naw, 8/10, Well Deserved - We Should Collab Some Time!

Word!
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