Rhyming/Flow
Flowed Pretty Decent, However Sometimes The Rhymes Were a Little Simplistic in Some PLaces. You Could've Used Some Multi's To Help It Out..But..meh, 6/10

Vocab/Wordplay
The Vocab Was o.k, Came n' Went But I Suppose Thats Your Style, Some People Like Me LIke Alot Of Vocab In Bars Other People LIke Little, Whatever Your Taste Is..7/10

Concept/Topic
Really Came Through Here. LOved The Way You Structured It, Tight Story That Kept Me Reading It All The Way Through. You Described The Feelin's, Emotion Well...8/10

Overall
I Was Expected Maybe A Bit More By Someone Of Your Skill, BUt I Was A Nice Piece, Don't Think I'm Hating Or Anything, Decent 7/10..


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