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Old 07-25-03, 08:56 AM   #3
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when i first started reading it i thought this wasnt going to be good
but it picked up after the first 6 lines...
then the imagery kicked in and u could visualise the fight about to happen...original shit as well...vocab was abit lacking but it flowed well
a different drop...give it 7/10
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