All comments appreciated

Aint on here long. Got a the damn flu, trying to fight it off before it spawns into something major (bastardo!).

Trinity - It wasn't about God as in the way you're thinking (well it is kind of, but overall, no). It's about humanity's 'versions' of god. How they use his name. So it was the humanity, and how (in general) with it shall usually come corruption. If only in the current and past state. Along those lines!

Content - I know what you're saying. But sometimes you got to be a bit more blatant. Though the piece itself didn't exactly mention 'god' killing anyone. And even when it did mention it indirectly, you have to dig to find that. More implicatoins than anything. I'll most definetly be ammending/adding to this. I've only ever finished 2 pieces in my life. And those two are lost, most probably, forever. So yeah, i just go with the flow. Titles are titles, to fit the piece in how the writer wants it to be. Or something like that...(!)..

Once again, all comments appreciated.