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when i flow i here damn!-flow like when GOD cast NOAK'S ARCH and used the earth for a dam-walk on the land,walk on water, walk on sand-the martyr...in my pressence you feel the essence-here the name JESUS!! so much im no longer a man-but an arch angel thinking i was caught fuckin a NUN in the VATICAN-
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^^^ this was deep, the flow and wordplay right throughout this poem is what made it easy to read.
I probably got a total different picture than you did writin this but i supose that what makes poetry!
The way you used religeon was another good point, i'm not religeous but religeon is the cause of most things on the planet eg:- WAR !
Nice piece!