ight... decent battle..

the breakdown...

D's verse

59 wins by Battlin nothing but newbs. . . Brooklyn mustnt have any poise . . .
only mods vote?! shits about to get flipped on ya..like priests gettin molested by little boys..

this was an iiiiight opener... the creativity factor was mediocre... but it was decent in my book... but too much filler in here.. killed the whole bar.


no choice..you were forced into this battle..now youre in Jeopardy like Trebek..
no newbie army...so now youre defenseless as fuck . . .like monks in Tibet

well personally i never heard this line... this was pretty nice.

get much respect from noobs but you dare not come lookin to vets. . .
if you can SSSSTTRRREEETCCCCHHH a dollar like a bar youll never be in debt

Nice personal

G-Unit reject..modern day Andy Dick the way you only battle the weak..
how do you consider yourself a vet when you still have a scrolling marquee?..

Nice personal

dont flee...have some honor and at least take this loss like a man...
bottom line..like sugarless Kool-Aid your rhymes arnt spectacular..but merely bland

ehh this wasn't great at all... didn't like this finisher.. could of been way better
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Brook's verse

Your 3rd Loss Was Personal, 'Stabbed Your Statements' So I Guess Your 'Irrelevance Was Hurtin-You'/
Your Curfew From Our Last Battle Was A 'No Show' Cus You Were Scared When The 'Curtains-Flew'/

nice personal and opener... and the multis were there.. good shit

This-Dames-Tight? Only 'Scores' When Opponents Fail To Spit-Game-Right/
His-Brains-Light, Dezyir Can't Be On My Level, Too Dumb To Spell His-Name-Right

the creativity factor was nice here...plus nice personal... and the multi's just made it cleaner and nicer.

Hits-Bang-Nice, With 'Great-Steaks' He Brings 'Prime Beef' That Will 'Stay-Ate'/
I Spray-Dates, Don't Ever Got The Time For 'Faggits' So Im'a Set This 'Gay-Straight'/

this was ight... but gay lines are done.

Punches Serve You 'Quick' Like 'Fast Food', Kid The Mood-Is-Groovy/
This Dudes-A-Groupie Claim Veteran But In A Group-With-Newbies/

see both of ya'll using you're a newbie lines.. thats cool..i see this one of those forced multis.

Droundin-Fool, Need A Boost Of Elevation First For You To Ever Escape-My-Spits/
Gets-Raped-By-Hits, Even If 'Dope Tutored' You, You Still Couldn't 'Elevate-High-Quick'/

the multis were there.. finisher line was up to par... good overall verse
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i felt brook to this.. cause of structure.. and more creativity..


vote= Brooklyn.

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