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Old 07-25-03, 03:37 PM   #5
Caramac
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Ok kids, im gonna delete all your freeposting in here so just the verses are left. .


Anyways, Dezyir, ok verse, flow was alright, a couple punches may of been worded better such as the "priests" line, but not a bad verse, punches were ok i guess, nothing really stand out. Brooklyn, damn - you had a lot of played lines in your verse, you had a lot of wordplay but most of it was weak in my opinion, only half-decent line was the "cant spell his name right" one, the rest were blah-zay in my opinion. All you multi's were forced, some werent even multi's, you just put hyphens in to make it look like it.

Vote: Dezyir
Better wording of his punches, nice personal to start with, less played lines, thats what i felt took it for him.

One sided battle.
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