cease the cure for the state of open mindness.
algebra and calculus are the borders that bind us
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said above but that line was dope man..

Flow: This flowed smoothly man, easy to read..9/10
Wordplay/Vocab: Voacb was tight, all yo lines didn't jus have little elementry words..9/10
Concept: Tight man, said earlier hasn't been played...Followed it, didn't go off course..9/10

Overall: 9/10

can ya check my verse out...'Mistakes'
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68292